假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^ ）并在其下面写出该添加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
On the hot afternoon of last Saturday, Li Yue went downtown and walk from one store to another, look for the clothes we would wear in the contest．While the rest of us was enjoying our leisure time in cool and comfortably rooms, she spent the whole afternoon searching and selecting．Finally she found the suitable clothes．Deeply moving by what she did, we tried our best but won the first prize in the contest．Li Yue is always cares about the class．She often devotes her spare time in helping others．She has set good example to us．Therefore, she deserves the honor and we should learn from him．
根据短文内容，从短文后的选项中选出能填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。
Industrial pollution is not only a problem for the countries of Europe and North America but also an extremely serious problem in some developing countries.１ They want to introduce industries, and so they put few controls on the industries which cause pollution.
Cubatao, an industrial town of 85 000 people in Brazil, is an example of the connection between industrial development and pollution. In 1954, Cubatao had no industry.２ The people of the town are suffering from the poisonous matter in their environment．３ Birth shortcomings are extremely common. Among children and adults, lung problems are sometimes twelve times more common in Cubatao than in other places.
４ However, these laws are not strict enough. It is cheaper for companies to take no notice of the laws and pay the fines(罚款) than to buy the expensive equipment that will reduce the pollution. It is clear, therefore, that economic growth is more important to the government than to the health of the workers.
However, the responsibility does not completely lie with the Brazilian government. ５A number of the factories in the town are owned by large companies from France, Italy, and the U. S. They are doing things in Brazil that they would not be able to do at home. If they caused the same amount of pollution at home, they would be severely punished or even put out of business.
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A．So the bad effects can be clearly seen. |
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B．It is true that Brazil has laws against pollution, |
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C．For these countries, economic growth is a very important aim. |
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D．The pollution in Cubatao is caused by the changes of the companiess. |
Ｅ．The government should play an important role in controlling pollution.
Ｆ．Today it has more than twenty large factories, which produce many pollutants(污染物)．
Ｇ．The example of Cubatao shows that international companies are not acting in a responsible way either.
The entertainment profession or “show business" attracts many young people. Unfortunately, only very few can hope to become famous and successful. Talent is not enough, because show business is as competitive as any other business .Without a good manager ,a performer can never hope to succeed .Fashion is important in this business, too. The best tailor in the world will never be a success if he makes old-fashioned clothes. In exactly the same way, a performer must change his “act" in order to follow the taste of the moment. This is true for actors, dancers and comedians, but perhaps most of all singers.
“Pop" stands for “popular" and a pop singer has to work very hard to become popular .He must either give the public what they already want, or he must find a new way of singing that will attract their attention. Even when he has succeeded, and his records are sold everywhere, he can not relax. Then he must work harder than ever because there are always younger singers trying to become famous and to steal some of the popularity.The life of a successful pop singer is not at all easy. He can only relax when he is alone, because everything he does is watched and reported in the special newspaper written for the “fans”. The fans are the most important people in the world for the singers. They buy his records, they go to his concerts and they make him rich and famous. But they can be very annoying, too. Sometimes their enthusiasm get so hysterical that they do anything to get a “souvenir"（纪念品）. They steal handkerchiefs, they tear off buttons, and they even cut off pieces of the unfortunate singer's hair. Many singers have been forced to hide. A pop singer has to spend a lot of money on clothes, because he must always look smart or at any rate different. He must have a luxurious car. And — most important — he must always keep smiling for the benefit of his public.
1.Why must a pop singer have a good manager?___________.
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A．To protect him from his fans |
B．To look after his business interests |
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C．To help him to change his “act" |
D．So that he can relax |
2.Why must a pop singer work even harder when he has become famous?___________
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A．Because he wants to attract the attention of the public |
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B．Because he wants to sell more records |
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C．Because he wants to become popular |
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D．Because he wants to stay popular |
3.For a pop singer , the most important advantage of having fans is that____.
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A．they buy his CDs or VCDs. They go to his concerts, and watch his MTV |
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B．they watch him and report everything he does |
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C．they shout and cry very loudly during the performance |
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D．they make him rich and famous |
假定你是吉安一中学生李华。在一位名叫Mrs. Worried的学生家长的微博上，你看到如下内容：
I am the mother of a sixteen-year-old boy. Recently I find it becomes more and more difficult to communicate with my son. He always sticks to his own way of doing things，refusing to listen to his father and me. The tendency of his being too independent really worries me. I simply don’t know what to do. Can anybody help me?
请给这位家长写一封信。要求包括以下要点：
1. 自己的看法；2. 陈述理由；3. 提出建议。
要求：
1. 词数130左右；
2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
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第一节：阅读表达
We all know eating out can be a lot of fun. There’s the experience of having someone wait on your every need，the social aspect of being in a restaurant with friends and，of course，the great benefit of the lack of in—home cleanup.
2We all also know eating out can be expensive，and I’m pretty sure college isn’t the most
financially successful time in a normal person’s life. That’s why eating at home for a majority of meals really is the only option for many college students.
Eating at home doesn’t have to be dull，boring，or difficult. —It can and should be an energetic，creative experience that transforms the way you look at food. When you cook for yourself, you know exactly how your pasta(意大利面)is going to turn out. You know where the greens in your salad come from. You know the olive oil you’re using really comes from olives that are pressed for the first time. Use eating at home as all opportunity to learn and develop your kitchen skills. I promise you they will remain useful and rewarding for the rest of your life.
Another important concept is to keep in mind that when it comes to shopping for food—less quantity, more quality. Buy base ingredients that are fresh，as local as possible and beautiful，and anything you cook will improve greatly. I promise you will be just as satisfied by eating a little bit less of something with a lot more quality.
I am not saying eating out is a bad thing. But I insist there are many more places that are not worth your cash. Put a little more effort into cooking for yourself at home and you will gain experience and appreciation for the world of food.
1.. List three benefits of eating out according to the text. (no more than 20 words)
①_______________ ②_______________ ③_____________
2.. Complete the following statement according to Paragraph 2. (no more than 4 words)
Many college students have to eat at home because of __________________.
3. What's Paragraph 3 mainly about?(no more than 7 words)
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4.What advice is given concerning shopping for food in Paragraph 4?(no more than 4 words)
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5.. What does the underlined word it in the third paragraph refer to?(no more than four words)
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Hospital emergency rooms treat injured fingers all the time. Without treatment，a bad cut can lead to permanent damage. But how should a person know when a bleeding cut is serious enough to require medical attention? We asked Dr. Martin Brown. Chairman of the department of emergency medicine at Inova Alexandria Hospital in Virginia.
First，the medical term for a cut or tear in the skin is a laceration(严重划破，撕裂伤). Dr. Brown says the length is usually not as important as the depth. He says a long cut on a finger can likely be treated without a visit to a doctor if the wound is not very deep. “If you have a short but deep laceration where there’s been a structure underneath that's been damaged a tendon，a nerve，a blood vessel,”says Martin，“it may, in fact，need professional attention. ”
Some injuries —like a fingertip that gets cut off might even require surgery to repair. That requires a specialist to either file(锉平) down the bone or reattach the fingertip. More often，filing down the bone is what is done because reattaching a fingertip is often not successful.
How a wound bleeds can be a sign of how serious it is. Minor cuts usually produce what is known as venous(静脉)bleeding. This means the blood flows steadily from the injury. The bleeding will often stop when pressure is put on the wound. Dr. Brown says in most cases holding direct pressure with clean gauze or a cloth for four to five minutes should stop the bleeding. With a cut finger, holding the hand above the heart can reduce the loss of blood. But if a cut appears to be pumping blood out with some force，this may be a sign of arterial(动脉)bleeding. This kind of injury should be treated by a medical professional as soon as possible.
Even a cut that does not require medical attention must be kept clean to prevent infection. Small cuts should be cleaned gently with clean water. Use a washcloth to clean the area if the wound is dirty. Dr Brown says cuts should be covered with a clean, dry bandage.
1. What does the writer want to tell the readers in the first paragraph?
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A．Hospital emergency rooms always treat injured fingers. |
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B．A bleeding cut is serious enough to require medical attention. |
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C．Dr Martin Brown is in charge of Inova Alexandra Hospital. |
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D．It is important for us to be able to tell how serious a finger cut is. |
2. According to the passage，_____________________.
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A．a finger cut without treatment will certainly lead to permanent damage |
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B．the length of a cut on a finger is more important than the depth |
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C．a long but not very deep cut often doesn’t need professional attention |
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D．a short but deep laceration that’s been damaged need professional attention |
3. The underlined word “reattach” in Para. 3 is closest in meaning to ________________.
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A．repair |
B．rebuild |
C．reconstruct |
D．reconnect |
4. Which of the following statements in NOT true according to the passage?
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A．How a wound bleeds can show us how serious the wound could be. |
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B．Venous bleeding will often stop when we put pressure on the wound. |
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C．Holding up the hand with a finger cut can reduce the loss of blood. |
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D．Arterial bleeding should get professional treatment as soon as possible. |
5. The best title of this passage should be ______________________.
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A．Hospital Emergency Treatments For Injured Fingers |
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B．When a Cut Finger Is More Serious Than It Might Seem |
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C．Serious Finger Cut That Requires Medical Attention |
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D．Keep Finger Cuts Clean to Prevent Serious Infection |
