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假定英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏宇符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

In my junior year of high school, my English teachers, Mrs. Matthews, was constant encouraging me. One day after class, she praised my work or said, “Jim, you have a real gift with writing.” Mrs. Matthews said after the while, “However, whether you want to make the most of it, you need to stick to your belief and struggle for your profession.Otherwise, you will never develop your full potential.”She added, You’ll find that the more higher you go in the world, the harder you have to work so as to succeeding.”So inspired I that I became certain about my belief. And they set me on the path I have taken ever since.

 

1. teachers → teacher 2. constant → constantly 3. or → and 4. with → for 5. the → a 6. whether → if 7. 去掉more 8. succeeding → succeed 9. 在inspired后加was 10. they → it 【解析】 这是一篇记叙文,主要讲述了作者在高三时,英语老师不停鼓励作者,让作者坚定信念,最终踏上人生新征程的故事。 1. 考查名词。结合语境可知,这里指的作者在高三的英语老师,同位语是老师的称呼Mrs. Matthews,其后接谓语was,因此可以十分确定这是一位老师,故把teachers改为teacher。 2. 考查副词。句意:我的高三英语老师持续不断地鼓励我。句子使用了进行时(was encouraging),修饰动词encourage,需使用副词而非形容词,故将constant改为constantly。 3. 考查连词。句意:有一天下课后,她表扬了我的作业并说……。该句中,表扬(praise)和说(say)是两个顺承发生的动作,并且不分彼此,而不是二选一的选择关系,故将or改为and。 4. 考查介词。句意:你在写作方面真有天赋。have a gift for sth.表示“在某方面有天赋”,天赋都是为(for)而准备的,故将介词with改为for。 5. 考查冠词。“过了一会”使用固定短语after a while,“一会儿”对应的英文表达是a while,需使用不定冠词,故将the改为a。 6. 考查连词。结合上下文语境,此处表达的是“如果你想要将你的天赋发挥到极致”,是假设关系(如果)而非选择关系(是否),故将whether改为if。 7. 考查形容词比较级。对于形容词的比较级,有些是more+形容词原形,有些是形容词原形+er,此处higher已是比较级,故去掉more。 8. 考查固定搭配。固定搭配as to+动词原形表示“为了……”,故将succeeding改为succeed。 9. 考查句子结构。句意:我十分惊讶,(更加)坚定了我的信念。分析句子结构可知,So surprised被置于句首,而非主语I,这是一个倒装句,正常的语序为I was so surprised that I became certain about my belief.(so…that…结构),倒装之后应为So surprised+谓语+主语+that部分,而原文漏掉了谓语,且全文均使用一般过去时,故在surprised之后,I之前加入was。 10. 考查代词。句意:它(这一信念)助我从此踏上人生的新征程。到底是什么助我踏上新征程?分析前后语境可知,是上一句末尾处的my belief,应用it指代,故将they改为it。  
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